[Privsec] Re: feedback until 9:00: our statement on privacy & Internet governance

[Gus Hosein]

This is great; and Karen's edits are perfect.

Sorry I couldn't respond sooner.

At 02:37 22/09/2005, Ralf Bendrath wrote:
>Dear all,
>
>attached find my draft of our PrepCom intervention today's morning 
>session of the WSIS PrepCom subcommittee A (Internet Governance). It 
>is basically a remix of our comments to the WGIG, the Montreux 
>Declaration of Data Protection Commissioners and yesterday's letter 
>to the chairman of this subcommitte and the president of the PrepCom 
>by the International Working Group on Data Protection in Telecommunications.
>
>Please have a quick look at it and suggest any improvements that 
>make the argument(s) flow better.
>
>I am also happy about any suggestions on how to cut it a bit. At the 
>moment, I am at 3:20 minutes, while we only should use 3:00 minutes.
>
>I have to give the final printed version to the translators by 
>10:00. So please give your feedback, if possible, until 9:00 (yes, 
>that is a.m. CEST).
>
>Thanks,
>
>Ralf
>