[Values-ethics] Ethical Dimensions revision

[Liberato Bautista]

Ralf,
Please find attached a few revisions that I am suggesting for the "Ethical Dimensions" section of the CS statement. Most of my changes are simply editorial tightening of the sentences, plus a repositioning of a couple of sentences, with one sentence in the fourth paragraph moved to the third paragraph. The first sentence in the fifth and last paragraph is not a new substance but a replacement of the whole deleted sentence in the middle of that paragraph in a way that gives context.
 
I thank you for what you have incorporated from the original Values and Ethics Caucus contribution to the overall CS statement.
Liberato
 
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REV. LIBERATO C. BAUTISTA
Assistant General Secretary for United Nations and International Affairs
and Main Representative to the United Nations
General Board of Church and Society of The United Methodist Church
 
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From: ct-admin at wsis-cs.org on behalf of Ralf Bendrath
Sent: Wed 30-Nov-05 2:12 PM
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Cc: CONGO - Alejandra Mendoza; Lorenzo Romano
Subject: [WSIS-CT] Re: [WSIS CS-Plenary] new version of WSIS CS statement



> Thank you for all your work on this.
It was all my pleasure. ;-)

> Can you repost the document, as I was unable to open as the message
> indicated document name or path not valid. Perhaps there is something
> amiss with the attachment.
Not sure how this happened (it just happened again when I tried to save it
as rtf), but here it is again - in doc format now, unfortunately.

Ralf


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